Terminal Bleed? Comments

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you speak of so many things through this poem ma'am.... and i feel you v written these words from your heart too.. in that sense this lines are very moving too ma'am.... deep and thought provoking indeed... arouses the reader's mind's eye to the full.. by the way i got your mail about you being busy these days.. hope to see you soon in PH With loves shan

Vidi, I feel for these situations and for those who are often unable to extricate themselves from it. Thanks for this poem, which is very well-written.

Very deep write, pure and yet sadness portrayed perfectly great piece '10' best wishes Jon

m touched deeply with this work..made us rethink of our conditions... y woman had to suffer so much.... as seconds....... very sad but then the truth cannot b denied.

sad but true, why earth only sheltered Seetha? a woman dies so many times. i feel despite education and economic freedom nothing has changed and is not likely to unless there is a change in the psyche. Vidi touching and moving brings out how deeply you feel.

Interesting accents on tragical in a background …nice...

‘cradle swings, in its own motion’…In the very opening line itself the poem gives the reader a startling start…and in those succeeding lines Vidi takes us through her entire tragic narration…we move along sad silent spectators… A poem sad but strong in theme and emotions *10*