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agr tu dost hai mera
to aadten kahan se aa gai
jo dil dekhta hai use tune ye dosti sikhadi
agr tu aadton se parkhta hai insaan ko
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Bajot jagah pe mujhe galtiya mili... I mean baat kuch chal rahi he aur very next lkne me kuch aur hi ja rahe ho... Grip turant hi tut jati he... Ek subject ko pakde rakho... 5th line me kya tha? Very bad that was. Read my new poem will o' the wisp... Tujhe subject ki grip samajh aayegi... Good luck... keep writing mate :)
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10/22/2025 5:20:48 PM # 1.0.0
okayyy broo i understandd this thankk u for complimentssss....