Tere Bin Hm Kaise Jee Payeinge..[maaaaa] Comments

Poetry in any language should follow one rule: rhythm. I think you should work in structuring of sentences to maintain that.

thank u so much sir... keep blessing............

once again BRAVO....... pretty good poem

thnx gajanan sir thanx ramesh sir..............and keep blessing......

touched my heart. keep writing without any expectation. future is yours. but remember poetry is devtion which is ever alive. novel story may b outdated but poetry never/ it is also my earnest request not to disturb your study for poetry bcoz this is the time for you to mould your life for a better tomorrow you have to write poetry till the end of life. so always take care. my blessings r always with you.

terebin kaise jee paenge, good write, thanks. I like your poems.

thank u so much bhaiya.......