Wednesday, September 9, 2020

Tercet - Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

Youthful don't dance with flamboyance
Old age is waiting for you to fall in its lap
Like a caged bird waiting for soul to fly.
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M. Asim Nehal
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Indira Renganathan 12 September 2020

Nice cautionary words...thought provoking 10++

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 10 September 2020

A poignant poem, with deep insight and profound philosophy of life and death, Asim ji......a brilliant write......10

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* Sunprincess * 09 September 2020

Very well thought poem.3 liners r my favourite

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Aarzoo Mehek 09 September 2020

A journey well completed. Those who are born has to die one day. Very well versed poem. A good 10++

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Sharad Bhatia 09 September 2020

Beautiful description about " life" Life is a cycle Whatever comes will go How will the sun rise when the sun does not sink? 100+

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M. Asim Nehal

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