Tension Comments
Life is full of risk and care to lead,
Everywhere we face a lot of dread.
In bus stand and railway platform,
Security of purse we can't conform.
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Tension provokes thought. Leaf carries letter. Calmness is inside own mind. This we should feel. Soul is pure. Nature impacts on soul. This is a great poem and you are a nice poet.
Nice journey with tough and love, thank you sir.
A good exponent of expression on tension and a remedy to get over....thank you Kumar...good poem- 10
picture of Chris G. Vaillancourt xVery well done 28 Mar 2015 by Chris G. Vaillancourt | Reply picture of kyle bearden xNicely constructed it almost felt like a dance 28 Mar 2015 by kyle bearden | Reply picture of Fay Slimm xA fine review of the word tension with its subtle meanings in this busy world. The verse too has clear appeal to follow right paths in life and gives good advice to those suffering tension. Thank you Kumar for posting this well-crafted poem. 28 Mar 2015 by Fay Slimm | Reply picture of PRdO... xThis is some piece. Thanks for sharing Seema. I truly enjoyed reading it. Tnx 31 Mar 2015 by PRdO... | Reply picture of sunprincess ♡ ♡ ♡ x.......beautiful thoughts on tension...a kind word or deed can always help ★ 1 Apr 2015 by sunprincess ♡ ♡ ♡ | Reply
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7/23/2025 11:01:18 AM # 1.0.0
Tension increases peace does diminish, Life becomes doleful love does finish.....so true sir. Liked this poem. Top score.