Sunday, September 4, 2011

Tenses Comments

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She hits my heart
She is tearing up my heart
They are demanding my heart
I am getting no help.
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Divya Divya B 16 November 2011

full off tenses, quite different. excellent work 10

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lover of poetry sweet 07 November 2011

a great job am happy with your tenses as well as tenses of language.10

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Christina Phan 07 September 2011

awww i love this poem and its very beautiful and what very wonderful job.

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