Monday, August 11, 2014

Tenebrous Night Comments

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A journey started with full vigor
There on the way eclipsed it by someone
Its randomness rest on the way
But its shine never stalls for all-time
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SALINI NAIR
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Geetha Jayakumar 14 August 2014

Thoughtful and positive poem. Beautiful lines says it all.... Though the hope is seize by mourn Still there twinkles hope in life And will succeed in a moonlit night! ! ! ! ! Very true said, Salini. There is hope even in mourn, which keep us moving in life...Loved reading it.

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Salini Nair 13 August 2014

there may be some stars twinkling even in tenebrous night..likewise there may be something to hope even in sadness

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 11 August 2014

Mourning comes in journey but that can't thwart the ongoing till the destination is reached.......It's the truth of life.............Insightful and very well composed

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Akhtar Jawad 11 August 2014

Still there twinkles hope in life And will succeed in a moonlit night! ! ! ! ! Hopes and dreams keep us alive. A nice poem.

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