Tending To Fall This Bald Tree Comments

This is one of your best poems.... 'Still with hope to become taller, Bald tree is falling down to dream! '.....these words speak about human life also....superb...many stars****************

The philosophy of life so emotionally portrayed through this poem. Birth, growth, youth, old age and death is the order of life. The broken and crippled tree is ready to leave this world. So is the case with every life on earth including the human beings. The truth of life presented through this bald tree. Thank you Kumarmani ji for this profound philosophy........5 stars

It is process of life. Childhood, youth and old age. One has to say good bye to this life someday. His might or wealth will not help. Once the tree was full of green. It gave shelters to many creatures. Now the green is gone. It stands forlorn waiting for its death. A nice poem. Enjoyed very much.

What an amazing poem about a bald tree bereft of its greenery, losing its strength, tending to fall.It cries of agony.There is no visible reason why it should fall.But it is the way of nature.When time comes, every living being will pass that period. A great philosophical poem.

An old man is like a withering tree.....! He like the old tree will surely fall down one day! Once we were full of life, just as a young tree full of leaves and green foliage! But as nothing is permanent here, everything has to meet with an inevitable end! This irrefutable truth has found meaningful poetic expression here!

Bald tree falling down - no one there to attend. It is poet's turn to capture the scene and deliver the feelings. " Naming each branch with a fictitious dream, But here we see one bald tree"

Good poem perceived on the picture uploaded

In a lush green outfield a tree is struggling to survive, nature knows what is the fate. The tree served its purpose now no strength, no leaves, weak roots. Who know a nes tree will replace it soon. A thoughtful poem, nicely written 10****

Storm! ! ! Natural laws! Power of nature. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

A well written poem. Truly splendid and brilliant...5 stars*****

This is indeed an amazing poem which has a touch of life and the philosophy underlying changes that we see around us in human beings as well as in nature. Thanks, Kumarmani ji, for sharing the same. I remember having read another poem composed by you on the same subject but with a different treatment altogether.