Sunday, May 26, 2013

Tenderness, Tendresse, Ternura Comments

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A Love that lives in tenderness,
Is when love can be at its best,
Like ship that rides the ocean crest,
And then finds port in Tenderness,
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Sandra Feldman
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Bri Edwards 14 June 2014

try its, not it's. i have enough trouble interpreting poems totally in english. my high school spanish skills were rusty about 50 years ago. one of the few phrases i can maybe pronounce is ferme la bouche. my mom used to say that once in a while when i was a kid............but not to ME of course! if one waits for love which is all and always tenderness, one may miss out on a lot of love. some weeks i get hit more often than i get kissed by my wife, but i KNOW she loves me, or SO SHE TOLD ME......years ago. bri :) thanks for sharing.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 30 May 2013

An adorable tender poem of love! Sweet n fab to read.

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Life Or Death Poetry 27 May 2013

i dont know if i am just overthinking your poem.. but i need to say it..

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Life Or Death Poetry 27 May 2013

well it is not going to happen fast.. i am really not ready.. i dont think you even have an idea.. besides the side you added.. i dont think i would be ready for the ultimite emrace.. i am just not ready.. are you ok with that..?

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