Friday, October 23, 2009

Tender Pulse: Comments

Rating: 5.0

Tranquil nights find closure beneath chaotic stars,
And forever finds a way to seep into our dreams.

Today I say:
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Brenda Arroyo
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Elena Sandu 15 March 2010

My breaths were meant for only one heart to enjoy. And that heart is not mine. It’s yours. That's lovely said, but please let me enjoy the breathes your heart brings out in words

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Deanna Holcomb 20 January 2010

A lovely and sad poem Brenda. Such depth. I loved it. Keep writing.

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Brenda Arroyo

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