Monday, August 31, 2009

Tender Moments Comments

Rating: 5.0

The sun ablazing
Birds a chirping
Together sing a couplet
Cat mewing
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Sonal Chhaya
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Marieta Maglas 09 March 2010

An angelic touch Warm to my skin Tender and soft Cradle me to thy breast wonderful feelings, well expressed poem 10/10

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Maheshi Chhaya 13 September 2009

a lot of scientific terminologies...gr8...

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 September 2009

Fire rekindled Bond renewed - To love and be loved Safe at last in the arms of love Sanctity thy name is MOTHER! ! ! ! last refuge in the arms of mother is final destiny andwe all get get some relief andfeel enlightened... very good write....10 read mine, o, mother, , , mom i mis u.. motehre and i wept.. momi cry even today...

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Dr.subhendu Kar 10 September 2009

A wave of frenzy Heart dances in ecstasy Hysteria overpower ancient suffering Fire rekindled.......................................soul seems to croon by dulcet tone and the eternity is thy mother of streaming glow, wonderful write yet yet passionately ingenious by imagery by unique genre,10+++, thanks for sharing

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