Tender Hearts Comments

Thanks guys.... this isn't one of my finest.. but my poems aren't written from a technical point of view (as I'm sure you can guess..) but they just were spurted from my heart when I was hurting. I had never written a poem before this time... but I am kinda thankful to the guy that hurt me.. Else I would never have reached into myself to fnd words and play with them...

No its not wrong to love, This poem comes across as a song, it flows effortlessly, awesome fine lines Love duncan X

A feeling to which many can relate, finely expressed. t x

Well Em, you know where I stand on this one! ! ! ! ! exquisite and by the way better than 'The Fray.! ' (avongal) hugs...

I am liking the language here, Michelle...You have established a poignant tone & decorum...Once again, you have displayed your keen sense of structure.The verse movement cascades as good poetry should...Solid Work. ~ F.J.R. ~