Friday, October 27, 2006

Tender Breeze Comments

Rating: 5.0

Why would I have lotus
from the lake?
If I can embrace your fragrance,
I would rather
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Kolitha Lelwala
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Sandra Fowler 12 November 2006

Praise for your mystical poem. Keep up the good work. Kindest regards, Sandra

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Nimal Dunuhinga 27 October 2006

Scattered pearls of tears in the tender breeze dragged me to some kind of meditation?

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Kee Thampi 27 October 2006

with pearls of tears I feel really a prostrate....in this verse....

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