Friday, October 21, 2005

Tender And Astringent Comments

Rating: ★3.3

You’re tender, I’m astringent,
few detours to the sweet.
Our love is not contingent
on synchrony of beat,
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gershon hepner
marriage surrender
COMMENTS
Stuart Mason 12 December 2005

Brilliant from start to finish. From the title to the last line. Excellent rhythm, rhyme, imagery and sentiment and a fitting end to the anthology.

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Marcy Jarvis 21 October 2005

I like this a lot, Gershon! really wonderful!

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gershon hepner

gershon hepner

leipzig
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leipzig
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