Tuesday, May 11, 2010

Ten Years Old (C) 5-11-2010 Comments

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Optimistic mind,
Truly it all comes with age
Paige could never look at time like a page from a book
Mostly mistook, but that wouldn’t stand in her way
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Hans Vr 18 June 2010

This poem takes us through a few troubling scenarios. Each look like child abuse but each have something from young adults never developed beyond the age of ten. Lots and lots of tragic moments in this world. Let's make a positive difference every day. Thanks for sharing lots of thoughts and feelings in this well written piece.

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Zahir Kijani

Zahir Kijani

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