Ten Years After Comments

This is truly a heartfelt, amazing poem Jacqui. I'm so sorry for your tragic loss but your approach in accepting it is inspirational and encouraging. If He thought this is the path to walk, then He must understand the hurt in my talk. So allow me to say it, though you cannot hear. When I say it, in spirit you must appear.-these lines are my utmost favorite and it warms my heart that you can find an alternative way to cope by turning to God rather than shunning him. He needed rest and I'm sure he's in a better place; because of this tragedy you've written these words that will continue his legacy and help keep those cherished memories while giving others hope in death. This is a great poem and I'm sure I'm one of many that will thank you for writing it...

So much feeling, hurt, pain and guilt driven by God. A lovely poem of love.

My heart pours out to you, I am sorry for your loss. The Lord hears your prayers, he sees your many tears. Your poem reveals great faith. May God bless you with comfort and give you peace. Sincerely, Kara

My deepest condolences, Jacqui. May God fulfill your wishes.

losing someone you love is like loosing the other half of your body, , , im so sory for the loss Jacqueline but i know you're a strong women, you'll survive...time is the best healer my friend, with time your pain will go away...just never forget that you have friends on this site, we love you dearly sis..we all are with you and praying for you in this difficult time of your life..just be strong girl..God never abandon His children

So sorry.May God give you strength. Keep writing, it's a beautiful out let for all emotions. Take care jacqui.

My very sincere and heartfelt condolences, Jacqui. I pray for your strength.

I am sorry for the loss... Jacqui, its difficult to say, to write, to live.. But gal you are extra ordinarily gifted.. you have the power to express what you feel, to pray for him.. You have written your heart out.. I know you have much more to say.. God Bless you.. Keep writing, take good care of yourself...

Ho! Jacqui, Jacqui - Tears rolled my eyes without my permission when I read this poem of yours - For first time I felt by heart how much you loved D* and how much you miss him. When I read your poems of broken before this I felt but not in this way........ Don't don't worry so much as lover may die but not your love castle which you have built over the years. But as you know well that a thing of past is past forever. We can't bring it back and at same time we can't go back. So think about one who is thinking about 24/7, day in and day out. Hope your respond............

i am so sorry for your loss, you took your pain and wrote a beautiful poem displaying your care for the one you loved. Its hard to understand why we have to go through such pain - and heart ache. Great write, Jacqui. Keep on writing.

A very sad, but very beautiful write. A fantastic poem.

My Condolences, i can feel the saddness in you, and i can feel the emptyness in you, there reality part of this world is that, we dont choose whether to go away from this world and live our love ones in hurt, neither do we choose to let them go away that they live us in hurt, only God has that ability, he gave us Dereck we were all smiles and we welcomed him on this world, but so he took him away, its fine to be in tears, but am sure he will always be with you