Saturday, February 13, 2010

Ten To One - Place Your Bets Comments

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This could be your lucky day
Beyond common gambler’s play
Countless prayers to nameless gods
One in a million beat the odds
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Carol Toebe Whiting
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Gigi Wiggins 11 May 2010

Great poem! to quote kenny rogers...ya gotta know when to hold'm, know when to fold'm, know when to walk away, know when to run.... Love the sentiments and the pace of the poem.

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Joshua Whiting 13 February 2010

Great poem very appropos for today and the risks of life. Keep writing.

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Rose-marie Mitchell 13 February 2010

What a great poem. Well written! Nice flow! .........'Fair game to even know when it's over and time to go' Absolutely beautiful!

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