Ten long years since I've seen your face,
You disappeared without a trace,
Ten long years since you said goodbye,
You took my heart and I thought I would die.
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Write comment. Beautiful start, Kim. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks
Hi, Kim, I'm Kim also. I enjoyed reading this. You show a lot of promise. A good first poem. Welcome to Poem Hunter!
Beautiful love poem, well articulated and elegantly embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. Lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharing Kim.
Ten year. A lifetime. I liked the honest tone of the words. Left the reader with a hopeful ending. Can you return to where you left?