Friday, September 15, 2017

Ten Fingers Work Together Comments

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We have two hands, there are ten fingers,
Both hands work, all ten fingers function,
All fingers are not of equal size we see,
But freedom they have is same, hand is also.
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Heather W.B. 05 October 2020

Every finger has its own role. Ten fingers in two hands work together and give us message of harmony. This is lovely stuff!

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Valsa George 17 September 2017

The fingers illustrate the principle that unity is strength! Though each finger differs in size and importance, unless they work in tandem, certain functions cannot be performed. Whether we are small or big, each one has a role in the scheme of things! This general truth is brought out through an apt example!

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Muzahidul Reza 16 September 2017

We have two hands, there are ten fingers, Both hands work, all ten fingers function, All fingers are not of equal size we see, But freedom they have is same, hand is also. wonderful write, thank you for sharing the poem with us

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Troy Cochran 15 September 2017

A very fruitful meditation upon unity and integrity. I will never look at my hands the same! This poem has a strength of community in it that we do not often see in the poetry of the West, with all our over-emphasis on individualism, as if one finger could make a fist. I rate your poem ten fingers. Thank you for sharing. :)

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Susan Williams 15 September 2017

A very tidy call for people to work together because we can be so much more effective as a group than a single entity. Excellent write my friend!

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