Friday, November 4, 2011

Temptations Comments

Rating: 2.7

Words find me in love with two souls
Fidelity confines me in drought like a dying rose
Her fragrance smells so sweet, I clutter my nose
Desperate to preserve the current river
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Vuyani Brown Mnisi
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Pheko Motaung 20 January 2012

This poem made my day.Thaks

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Vipins Puthooran 08 November 2011

It's a good poem/well written

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Swabi Mnisi 05 November 2011

its like you were closely watching my every move and assesing my heart whist pulling strings on my mind.this is just a perfect discription of what i am battling with, big ups bra.you are great

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