Wednesday, November 2, 2011

Temptation Comments

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I was tempted by the devil today
But, when I saw it I turned and walked away,
Then when I was alone to GOD I did pray
I thanked him for making me strong that very day.
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Randy McClave
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Pari Dharawat 02 November 2011

Dear Poet, thats just BEAUTIFUL....temptations are bad, they say it is like a knife you want to lick. nicely brought thoughts together. i want to bring to your notice that you might wanted to write 'sow', but you wrote' sew', it is really small but plse check as i think this poem is good :) keep writing :)

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