Friday, September 1, 2006

Temptation Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am both the Adam and Eve in my story, male and female,
I am entwined together. Me, sitting quietly,
holding my own hand; it feels so soft.
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William Jackson 10 September 2006

The seduction of the self by the self. I like it. Yin and yang in one.

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 01 September 2006

Abstract concept with awesome statement for todays genre...a fine penning Ms. B. W/ fINS''''''''''''''''FJR(W/O FINS)

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