Tuesday, August 5, 2008

Temptation Comments

Rating: 5.0

He gets out of the couch
Stretches a little bit
Takes a look around
No lights, no sounds
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Ananda Alves
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Donall Dempsey 08 June 2009

Life...love...on the rocks with a bitter twist of lemon. Clever and well achieved. You pull the rabbit of surprise out of the hat of meaning. Magical! love Dónall Dónall

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Colin Jeffery 22 August 2008

This is a very good poem. Great

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Tom Balch 05 August 2008

WOW what a great read I really like this piece 10/10

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Ananda Alves

Ananda Alves

Rio de Janeiro, Brazil
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