Thursday, May 22, 2008

Temptation Comments

Rating: 5.0

Deep within thy lovely eyes
Certain vicious desire lies
Can sense it in the way you see
Dazed … I feel like a zombie!
...
Read full text

Seema Aarella
COMMENTS
Eyan Desir 17 June 2010

such a beautiful flow of words great write

0 0 Reply
Reshma Ramesh 28 October 2008

hmmm thought provoking poem seema........one of ur best write........well done

0 0 Reply
Sathyanarayana M V S 04 October 2008

A matured poetry in right symmetry and good words....this is the way several eminent poets like Ershad like the poems to be

0 0 Reply
Raj Nandy 25 September 2008

A good poem! We grow and mature with time and progress with faith in God! Seema, have you read my - ' To err on the positive side '? -Raj Nandy

0 0 Reply
Joseph Poewhit 22 May 2008

We all get tempted in life, it's just part of GOOD & EVIL

0 0 Reply
Seema Aarella

Seema Aarella

KGF, India
Close
Error Success