Thursday, June 9, 2016

Temptation Comments

Rating: 4.5

Like an octopus tied to different piles of rock
My tentacles felt the stretch at different angles
I tried to stand my ground but the tides were too great to avoid
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Vincent Igwilo
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Winter Wyte 27 June 2016

i love how you used the sea to describe temptation

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