Temptation Comments

A charming poetic poem on how temptation lures us but fidelity pays and that's why i enjoyd the faithful love feel of yor wondrful poem. Nice to read u again.

most beautiful depiction of a commitment for the one locked in heart, and to whom only this heart would be unlocked. poetry at its best.

Hope! May it always flower in your heart dear Poet. I'm no genius and have had my own problems with loving women and feeling loved back as you well know, but there is one thing that I am 99.99% sure of, and that is that expectations kill love. True love I believe is the ability to receive the love others bring us, not a check list we devise to verify their love is real. My prayer for myself at least is that I will have the courage to let the love that finds me come into my heart, locking the door only when I find it comes with conditions.

beautifully done.liked it.