Sunday, March 10, 2013

Temptation Comments

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I always thought that love was simple
I never thought cheating would ever be a thought
I always thought I wouldn't want anyone else
Until I met him,
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Payal Parande 10 March 2013

well used words and well expressed emotions.....good work indeed forbidden fruit is always attractive, it is unknown, it looks Delicious, and most important we are not allowed to have it and that makes it more tempting......... good job keep writing

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