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Awww, Alyson I love this. your writing is very good. I love you!

Wow that was pretty good. I kinda related with parts of that poem. nice job

That was Deep. That was all that I was going to write but it saying that it has to be at least 20 words. What do you know I go it

Shades of Emily Dickinson I must say very good

I like this poem. It depresses me, but at the same time, there is a great deal of truth to what you're saying. I also like the way you get your point across without overdoing it.

I really like that, Aly. It's so true too. Nice poem!