Temporary Sinkholes Comments

Y.our write brought back unpleasant memories of a less than perfect relationship I endured for many years before meeting my soul mate. It was this line that stirred me: 'I wait too long for some sort of reassurance, maybe a flower or one arm curled around my shoulder or eye contact for once, but I'm positive I have not waited long enough' This is what kept me so long away from meeting the man that I love so much and who reciprocally truly loves me throughout our 27 years together. A ten for a descriptive interesting write.

You know whereof you speak- I pray that it is second-hand knowledge and not first-hand. This is powerful and makes a body cringe, this is heart-wrenching and makes a person wish for wisdom. On another level, I like the style you choose to write this in. This is a 10 + write.