Temporary Phase Comments

Phase of Life and Memory Danuw Rachman4 minutes ago someone ever told me when i was hopeless, losing, and desperate... he said Life keeps on moving, and time is always running... there will be the time when someone must stand like a crag crushing the wave and facing storm in his life... and that storm will remain as a thing we keep in mind and remember... and that's the depiction of memory... R.A Kartini created a book entitled habis gelap, terbitlah terang (come a light after dark) .... life is just like that. :) thank you again for sharing sir... :) Comment +1 didn't mind it

n Stefan Daniels9 minutes ago Fragmented wording but pure in itself

Good Felipe Chacon Jr.3 minutes ago Good Rhyme And Writing Comment +1 Good read

Ozzy5 minutes ago Kudos Comment +1 A true temporary poem

Enne Aig3 minutes ago still looking for something in there. love the rhyme, Good poem

Dear Sir, I am reminded of the Ode: Intimations of Immotality From Recollections of Early Childhood' by William Wordsworth, when I read your line, Now those memories are definitely recreated. The word 'Recollectons', used by Wordsworth, is similar to the word memories' used in your poem. A fine poem. You think of the past which you could not forget; likewise, Wordsworth recollects his childhood days. With regards, K. Sadasivan, Chennai Aug 03,2012

Nafisa Chunawalla Memories do chase us, live with us and do get revived.At times it is cathartic.

The clouds were over cast The sun had just become past