Saturday, September 12, 2009

Temple Of My Soul Comments

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temple of my soul give me joy
spiritually and mentally make me smile
take my mortale parts and make them smile
for within you lies the secrect of ecstasy
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Adens Kamwi
joy
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Whisperkwane Lamb 23 September 2009

I love the way you put the poem together...very good very...

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Bryan Alexander 14 September 2009

i like the message of this poem very much. the desire to build yourself up and become stronger internally is evident........10

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Chitra - 13 September 2009

seeking solace and strength from within, from the inner cloister of cosmic force...well done

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Marieta Maglas 12 September 2009

nice cognitive metaphor: 'temple of my soul hear me speak'' well written poem........10

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Adens Kamwi

Adens Kamwi

Katima Mulilo, Namibia
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