temple of my soul give me joy
spiritually and mentally make me smile
take my mortale parts and make them smile
for within you lies the secrect of ecstasy
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i like the message of this poem very much. the desire to build yourself up and become stronger internally is evident........10
seeking solace and strength from within, from the inner cloister of cosmic force...well done
nice cognitive metaphor: 'temple of my soul hear me speak'' well written poem........10
I love the way you put the poem together...very good very...