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Milk as a cascade, over the golden idol, anoints,
Worries get washed away in the same way it aroints;
Rosewater showers over the God as libation,
Diluting all the woes it guides me to liberation
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These rituals, when performed in the right spirit lead us to a state of absolute bliss when we merge with the Great entity and forget all other trivialities! Very arresting write! !
Excellent and superb word arrangement that reaches the very depth of the theme. The activities of the temple (church) and the religious belongings have all got a nice pen.
Wel written neethu.while reading this poem, i was mentally inside thetemple imagining watching thesd rituals.well written.
the poem has not left out a single article needed for the ritual.. such minute eyes for details, , , and the beauty of the poem lies in the last 2 lines :) thanx
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7/21/2025 12:57:43 PM # 1.0.0
Hey Neethu..Great lines...Please write more poems....