Tuesday, October 25, 2016

Tempest In My Heart Comments

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The sky of my heart is over cast.
The wind blows and roars.
The sun is veiled with the cloud
And my heart is afraid of the storm.
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Dipankar Sadhukhan
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Laurie Van Der Hart 25 October 2016

Sorry, I meant it was VIVID.

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Laurie Van Der Hart 25 October 2016

Very i, Dipankar! You capture the emotion very well with the storm metaphor.

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Dipankar Sadhukhan 25 October 2016

Thank you so much dear poet for your generous words...

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