I liked this poem. Simplistic in design and saved from cliche by the final lines of stanzas 1 & 2, and the informality of line 3 of stanza 3, followed by a more 'heightened' close to that stanza. A plaintive and unpretentious little conceit.7/10.
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I liked this poem. Simplistic in design and saved from cliche by the final lines of stanzas 1 & 2, and the informality of line 3 of stanza 3, followed by a more 'heightened' close to that stanza. A plaintive and unpretentious little conceit.7/10.