Saturday, June 4, 2005

Tempest Comments

Rating: 2.0

It looks like stormy weather,
Sunshine and rain filled clouds,
Heavy rain and rainbows,
And peels of thunder loud,
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Linda Harnett
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Andrew Konisberg 04 June 2005

I liked this poem. Simplistic in design and saved from cliche by the final lines of stanzas 1 & 2, and the informality of line 3 of stanza 3, followed by a more 'heightened' close to that stanza. A plaintive and unpretentious little conceit.7/10.

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