Saturday, August 1, 2020

Tempat Subur Di Gurun.... Comments

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Titel sebenarnya harus OASIS atau OASE tapi kalau mau terbitkan dlm PH ini dibilang sdh ada, TAPI bahasa lain
sajak ini tidak diterima karena sama namanya, menjadi kutulis sbg OAS saja
apa itu Oasis?
Sesuatu seperti kebahagiaan Tuhan?
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Sylvia Frances Chan
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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 August 2020

An Oasis at home is just like peace that we feel in personal level. You have beautifully expressed your wonderful thought with beautiful photo in this excellent poem. We get a clear idea about Oasis. The beautiful weather near beach gives interesting essence to feel about this topic. Great effort is beautifully brought up in an amazing imagery. " Hari ini sangat indah cuacanya bahwa keadaan di pantai ada segalanya."

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Sylvia Frances Chan

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