Tuesday, January 12, 2016

Telly With The Belly (Limerick) Comments

Rating: 4.5

There once was a man named Telly
Whose belly was very like jelly
But what's really sad
He was more than glad
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Wes Vogler 16 January 2016

to founder himself at the deli (L5) no so bad lad

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Spock The Vegan 05 October 2016

Thanks. Your line does work better that mine, considering the syllable count. I can't use it now, though, because it is your work, not mine.

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Kim Barney 12 January 2016

I was going to add a comment that included the word SMELLY, but I see that Kelly Kurt already used it! Fun limerick.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 January 2016

Wow, ..very funny Limerick poem shared here is interesting. Telly's belly was like jelly. Wonderful composition shared on.

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Spock The Vegan 05 October 2016

Thanks a lot.

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Kelly Kurt 12 January 2016

Being named Kelly, I have had such rhymes made at my expense since I was a child. I usually chime in with I'm also smelly. : -)

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