Tell Yourself You'Re Happy Comments
Happiness is quite a thing,
Can turn a pauper to a king,
Makes poor in spirit chant and sing,
Yet what true hope doth therein lie?
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I love this* 'Happy is the sole survivor on a shipwreck full of whiners'. Brilliant! Did you mean to put-' You're happy? ' instead of' your happy? ' I am not sure if this was deliberate or a mistake. Also, in verse 4, I'm not sure whether the second and third lines work. Maybe, you could twitch it a little. Hope you don't mind me saying this. I just think a little tweeking would really make this wonderful poem, excellent.
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7/24/2025 6:20:04 PM # 1.0.0
I love this* 'Happy is the sole survivor on a shipwreck full of whiners'. Brilliant! Did you mean to put-' You're happy? ' instead of' your happy? ' I am not sure if this was deliberate or a mistake. Also, in verse 4, I'm not sure whether the second and third lines work. Maybe, you could twitch it a little. Hope you don't mind me saying this. I just think a little tweeking would really make this wonderful poem, excellent.