O’ river your are so calm,
Nice to see way you flow,
Love to watch the sun set,
So attractive you look then.
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on this soft sand of yours, Make me think deep of you................... ..ravishing ripples as yet mellow slithering breeze by its side swoons pain heart rejoices by deep ecstasy beams of white when spills over its haste, yet most passionate write by imagery, yet emotive.10+++, thanks for sharing
Beautiful write on river. Nice to see way your words flow. Enjoyed reading it Thanks for sharing with me 10+++
Beautiful! Calm and serene write. A wealthy river full of knowledge. Enjoyed the read, ; D
A charming poem on river and its calmness in different settings. Nicely penned. Thanks
Delightful to feel your presence, At night you glitter so intimately, Charming moon is looking at you. your wonderfufl thoughts on the calm river.. one tendency i see now in ur new poems. you have become simple in writing and not using complicated words. it is a nice development. you feel free and i sense it in your poems. thank you sree