Saturday, June 29, 2019

Tell No One How Good You Are Comments

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Care not to quote your great qualities—
Be thou learned and wise
Or if not otherwise,
The wise know well enough what truth is,
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Revisiting this one of a kind limerick. I concur with the wonderful comments of the great Poetess, Valsa. Our great qualities will speak for themselves. There is no need to brag our assets.

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Valsa George 17 December 2019

Many people keep bragging of their qualities and accomplishments. This self praise is annoying to the listeners. The wise ones can easily make out what type of a person one really is. Trying to impress them by vain talk won't raise one's status unless one really deserves the qualities highlighted. Blowing one's own trumpet is a despicable quality. It is others who are to rate us seeing our performance. Beautifully condensed in this well written limerick.

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Aniruddha Pathak 18 December 2019

You have really put the facts in true perspective, dear poet, thanks for liking it

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Savita Tyagi 09 July 2019

Well said. this is the ancient wisdom we grew up with. Now a days with changing life style, with TV. Twitter and media bombarding us, it feels that one get only talking points. Louder you are better you can make others believe for Sun to be coming out of West.

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Aniruddha Pathak 10 July 2019

Good point, we have too much of yak, yak everywhere. Look at politics, come to working places, why, everywhere. I used to call some of my colleagues as NATO members (No Action, Talk Only) . Thanks

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Aniruddha Pathak 09 July 2019

Well, again today, the same thing The message says: 'The page could not be found'.

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Bharati Nayak 07 July 2019

Care not to quote your great qualities— Be thou learned and wise Or if not otherwise, The wise know well enough what truth is, And to fools it is like passing breeze. - - - - A wise thought told in light humour. Your attempt to introduce new variation in limmerick is really wonderful.I like it.

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Aniruddha Pathak 08 July 2019

You noticed it right, and seems you have read the notes fully. There are a few on PH already and more are to come. I'd love to have your comments. Thanks indeed. Glad to see you in print again. Your page was not traceable for a while.

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Bharati Nayak 08 July 2019

I wonder to know that my page was not visible to you.It may be so to many others. I am glad that it is visible now.Thanks for letting me know.

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Aniruddha Pathak 09 July 2019

Well, again today, the same thing The message says: 'The page could not be found'. (Report)

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Mahtab Bangalee 02 July 2019

a thief screams out he did not steal anything; a plagiarist screams out he is true writer; a swindler politician screams out he is real democratic leader; but; a true one always lives in silent

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Aniruddha Pathak 03 July 2019

Yes, indeed and no need to open the mouth, for, people anyway know/find out. Thank you for the feedback.

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Jane Campion 01 July 2019

An excellent poem showing top level skill as a Poet. Thank you for your kind comments.

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Aniruddha Pathak 02 July 2019

Thank you for your liberal comments, dear poet.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 29 June 2019

Brilliant write. A wonderful limerick with insight and wisdom. Liked the two closure lines. A wonderful and serious thought with a tinge of humor. Onto my Poem List. I liked how you modify this poetic form. Great limerick.

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Aniruddha Pathak 30 June 2019

I especially welcome your views on the use of this format, dear poet. I see that you have also read the notes.

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Mj Lemon 29 June 2019

This is brilliant! This gem goes to myfavourites. You have defined/redefined a poetic form and made a very thought provoking observation....The truly wise demonstrate their qualities by example. Others, they talk....Great verse, Aniruddha!

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Aniruddha Pathak 30 June 2019

Thank you so much Mj Lemon for your comments on the use of this format and this experimentation. I think Limericks can be used for a variety of poetic contents, not just humorous.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 29 June 2019

The wise know well enough what truth is......a brilliant write sir......................................10

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Aniruddha Pathak 30 June 2019

Thank you Dr Swain, I'll feel obliged if you give your views on a limerick format in this case.

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