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Nice to see someone so young as yourself writing poetry. I like this one, but if I can be so bold, please check your spelling. (gard /guard....breve / breath...Evam / even...spip / spit) I know you want to make a good first impression with your art, so take a little extra time to proof read before posting, and make sure it is correct... Keep on writing... you have a talent for this