I love you,
I need you,
I want you,
Why can't you
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Nice persuasive write-up... Repetition of words gives impressive effect.. You convey what you want to say without even an iota haziness.10 +++++ Regards Kushal
I like the structure you have. The repetition of a phrase is always a good device. I also liked the purpose behind this writing. And the focus was clear. Good job. GW62
I love you............................... good poem. hehe
i really enjoyed this poem it was really welll written and im always a sucker for love peotry... so 10/10 here
hey this is sweet way of expressing yourself indeed....emotions seems to flow out spontaneously. cheers to your my beloved friend 10++
Now i understand why everything is in one block, although if i were you i would try to use a computer rather than a phone. As for this poem, normally i hate lines being repeated, but i think this is one of the rare occasions this works for me.
this is a beautiful poem.your real emotion is written here..but don't be confused of your feelings, love will just come in a right time...grace
Bless really nice and i hope he told you he loves you - if you love someone you should tell them every day but sometime its just nice to know they do.
It's really good- would be easier to read if you put the different ideas on different lines though...
Love is beautiful and ugly.Your poem is beautiful!