Friday, May 29, 2009

Tell Me You Love Me Comments

Rating: 4.9

I love you,
I need you,
I want you,
Why can't you
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Toni Bellanger
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 03 August 2009

Love is beautiful and ugly.Your poem is beautiful!

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Kushal Vaishnani 06 June 2009

Nice persuasive write-up... Repetition of words gives impressive effect.. You convey what you want to say without even an iota haziness.10 +++++ Regards Kushal

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Greenwolfe 1962 06 June 2009

I like the structure you have. The repetition of a phrase is always a good device. I also liked the purpose behind this writing. And the focus was clear. Good job. GW62

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I love you............................... good poem. hehe

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James Fumich 04 June 2009

i really enjoyed this poem it was really welll written and im always a sucker for love peotry... so 10/10 here

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Ashraful Musaddeq 04 June 2009

Sweet and cute. 10 for this lovely poem.10+++

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Akram Awadat 04 June 2009

wow, lovely poem i like it thanks

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Shashendra Amalshan 04 June 2009

hey this is sweet way of expressing yourself indeed....emotions seems to flow out spontaneously. cheers to your my beloved friend 10++

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Brishti Mazumdar 03 June 2009

Loved it..Loved the aggression...Brishti Mazumdar

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really really good 10+

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Gordon Wilkinson 01 June 2009

Now i understand why everything is in one block, although if i were you i would try to use a computer rather than a phone. As for this poem, normally i hate lines being repeated, but i think this is one of the rare occasions this works for me.

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Karamia Smith 01 June 2009

this is amazing! i love your use of repetetion here too.

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Lady Grace 30 May 2009

this is a beautiful poem.your real emotion is written here..but don't be confused of your feelings, love will just come in a right time...grace

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The Dreamer 30 May 2009

Bless really nice and i hope he told you he loves you - if you love someone you should tell them every day but sometime its just nice to know they do.

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Joseph Poewhit 29 May 2009

Just has that asking for love feeling.

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Meg Lealand 29 May 2009

It's really good- would be easier to read if you put the different ideas on different lines though...

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Toni Bellanger

Toni Bellanger

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