Sunday, July 1, 2012

Tell Me You Don'T Love Me? Comments

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Kiss me on my lips
With the kiss saying goodbye.

Just show me that you love me,
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victoria avina
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a A smooth, poignant write...I like the variable stanzaic structure you've employed(Tercet & Couplet) . Nice Work! ~FjR~

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