Tuesday, February 16, 2016

Tell Me Why Comments

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TELL ME WHY
Somebody please, somebody please tell me why,
Some live a hurtful life to just die,
Look at the poor people cry,
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Atasha Williams
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Tom Allport 19 May 2017

a poem of many questions of the world in which we now live? ................superbly written.

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Cmack Estevez 06 April 2016

Wow this incredible

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Atasha Williams 06 April 2016

Thank you love

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Juan Olivarez 01 March 2016

Your words carry the torch of truth. well done.

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Atasha Williams 06 April 2016

thank u darlin

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Dr Antony Theodore 26 February 2016

oliticians have to lie, Drain the treasury dry, Others struggling everyday jus to get by, I try, not to pry So I jus get high… Tell me why is it so in the world. why is it so unfair....... you are raising a great question. it is our duty as poets and writers to raise the voice against all injustices in the world. thank you for this poem of justice. tony

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Edward Kofi Louis 26 February 2016

Life is unfair at times. Nice piece of work.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 24 February 2016

all your doubts are true if you continue only then in God's existence will you believe and only he will live just believe we all want immortality you, God and me... three first will be HE then you maybe later me another guy also asked me so this do read colour red is lovers have said worldly dangerous till one is dead or inside rear seats bled what is your take professing red... have you not yet wed kid!

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Atasha Williams 25 February 2016

Wowwwwww.... You are something else Mr. Poet Poet :) Thank you for the impromptu rhymes. Keep up the good work

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Anita Khelawan 17 February 2016

Life doesn't always go with your expectation, Disappointment is part of life's education... cool lines :) ... keep writing

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Atasha Williams 18 February 2016

Thank you. :)

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