Monday, June 14, 2010

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The humming bird flaps its wings frantically to hover.
The hawk glides in gusts of wind to soar.
The peacock has a majestic tail of colorful feathers.
Ever wonder why?
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Ben Bergeth
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ellie carpenter 23 June 2010

great poem! nice flow all the way through! i liked it alot! hope you keep writing i love reading your poems! there amazing! love ya xoxoxo ellie

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Ash Moore (NEW POEM!) 15 June 2010

Wow, nice follow up ending. Great poem Ben.

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