Saturday, August 17, 2013

Tell Me Where Your Smiles Hide Comments

Rating: 4.5

No matter where it gone
Tell me where your smile hides
We shall climbing high to the clouds
Searching across the driest desert
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Unwritten Soul
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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 March 2018

Smile is the key of heart that can easily open the hearts of others. It can remove the miseries, wandering thought and worries and brings happiness. Smiles cost us no penny but to get it isn't easy. Dear poetess Soul, you have hauntingly and startlingly inscribed here about smiles. Beautiful didactic poem shared. Thanks.10

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Hazel Durham 21 August 2016

Great imagination and the plea for the smile you love on your beloved to come back and for you to dive into your beloved's heart to bring it back to the face you love, to swim in the joy melting in his eyes to bring back happy to your beloved's face! Superb write!

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Unwritten Soul 22 August 2016

I love to see people smiling and be happy... it make surrounding me alive, not just living....and of course i want to see all here, my readers and you to smile, be happy too :) Thanks Hazel for reading me...Keep smiling

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Susan Lacovara 09 September 2013

Enjoyed your straight from th heart lyrics...Will continue to read your poetry. Please feel free to comment on mine, as well. PEACE

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Susan Lacovara 09 September 2013

Shouldn't everyone spend a little more time searching for smiles...enjoyed your straight from the heart lyrics. Will continue to read your poetry. Feel free to comment on mine as well. PEACE

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Heather Wilkins 02 September 2013

let me read the map of your heart I will find where your smiles hide nice and sweet

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Ramesh Rai 26 August 2013

smiles are hidden in soul which is much more deeper than that of sky. the depth of this poem can not b measured why not of sky is feasible. beautiful smiling write.

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Alookh (matin) 21 August 2013

Let me read the map of your heart I will find where your smiles hide... very creative and i liked the idea.. :)

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Neela Nath Das 20 August 2013

Smile is the reflection of mind.Your search is appropriate.Really it is getting lost in the mist of disbelief, distrust and lack of simplicity.

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Lyn Paul 20 August 2013

Truly beautiful Soul. Super poet notes too.thank you

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Kee Thampi 19 August 2013

touched the bottom love His pain for his love at her soul If you give me a map of your heart I'll dive and bring it home love kee

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Valsa George 18 August 2013

If smile disappears from the face of someone, especially someone we know close, it is our duty to find out its reason and help him/her get back that smile! As a humane person, you cannot ignore the glum face of someone you love. You are prepared to map out where smile hides and dig it out, like a good geologist! ! A really praise worthy attitude! !

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Farah Ilyas 18 August 2013

Here it is: -p hahaha...hmmm how sweet to read ur poem, its fabulous to read, read and read again..a melodious poem Soul...loved it

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Lucifera Santez 18 August 2013

Allow me to find And return to your face The place where it belong To add beauty with the world. amazing lines. loved the soulful concept. :)

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Geetha Jayakumar 18 August 2013

Yes, dear my smiles are gone nor I can find my heart's map as my smiles took away my hearts map too. but your lovely poem brought back the smiles on my face.... Beautiful poem..Loved reading it.

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Dinesan Madathil 18 August 2013

All our smiles are just hidden.. But they may bloom out soon..

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Shahzia Batool 18 August 2013

Confident topographical expertise, Let me read the map of your heart I will find where your smiles hide And happiness will alive Again

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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 18 August 2013

wonderful Soul.. your words and imagery so alive sweet and tender of smile, that's why we have to find and save it, no matter its cost smile make the world brights like lantern in the darkness side a hope of your sight to fly to the beauty of paradise

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Nontobeko Dlamini 18 August 2013

a smile can brighten the darkest nights of ones life...it is hope. Love this poem for i believe in the power of a smile. Thank you Soul.

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Nader Baheri 18 August 2013

oh i love this poem.so sweet.with just a simple smile life would be so sweet.sometimes we hide it.thank you bringing my smile up. ~nb

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Arnav Gogoi 18 August 2013

Mostly if it hiding inside Give me the map of your heart I'll wander around to bring it home Will you share me where your smile hides? Good expression....love the use of words..good imageries as well...thanks for sharing

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