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hey white dove, This is seriosly an awesome piece of work..post it in a way that it reaches ur friend, ...he/she 'll surely turn to u..coz this poem is really driving the feelings..! ! keep writing..pls comment on ma poems too. regards, shyam.

Wow! It's a great poem.Oh your friend should proud about you.Coz you've written this poem for your friend.Don't worry your friend will talk to you soon.Great work.