Tell Me What You See Comments

It's beautiful... so you write for stress relief, I write to improve my work but at times gibberous by pen or keyboard is the result. Only some of what I've written is worthy of posting. Thanks for posting this one. As I said - it's beautiful.

wow Howard I love this poem... every single line touched me deep inside... this treassure when he/she has his/her eyes closed... those moments when the really important thing is happening inside... and we can feel it...or not... wow... just amazing, I can't describe what I feel right now with your words....thanks for sharing!

Good job on this, 'Tell Me Your Thoughts When You Have No Thoughts', it's sounds like something i could say. PZ.

Howard...I have to agree with some of your fans....my favorite lines.... Tell me your thoughts When you have no thoughts Tell me what you see When your eyes are closed..... loved your poem...thank you :)

You had me in the first two verses but then it felt like you were talking to someone else. The good thing about reading, as opposed to listening, is you can go back and figure it out... poetry is like that - I enjoyed analysing this. 10/10

Hello Howard, Will easily believe... When you see, and when you see closed by eyes, it already comes nearer with belief, beautiful poems and and is sensitively read... 10... Tsira

i just got your message and this poem is so romantic and great. Have you ever had anything published because i think this one could be you seem like a guy with a lot of heart, understanding, and kindness and that will get you far in life

Hi Howard! I think this is beautiful...very romantic! I really love your opening line 'tell me your thoughts, when you have no thoughts, ' as in saying I want to know everything about you, inside and out. Great job on this one!

wow this poem makes me think about what i want to know about people i love. this poem goes into my heart and makes me smile and think at the same time the poem is great 110%

I like the contrast in the lines of this one, but the thought and thought pattern seems broken off at the end.

I love this poem Howard I am giving you a 10. Hugs 2 yah, Linda