Tuesday, May 19, 2009

Tell Me The Time Comments

Rating: 5.0

Tell me the time of this day before the dawn
When the birds are not yet singing
And the duvet is still warm,
The sun has not yet risen
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Wojja Fink
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Cindy Kreiner Sera 24 May 2009

The time you describe before waking and on waking, under a warm duvet is the best time Wojja, relaxed, mind clear and refreshed then finally day arrives and the bird's choir is heard - stunning, love the rhythmic flow throughout.

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Shashendra Amalshan 20 May 2009

'Now is the time the day at last has come The blackbird is in tune The robin’s just begun, The pigeon is a cooing The magpie’s shouting loud The swallows sweeping low In circles round a cloud' very rhythmic indeed..liked the imagery very much// both auditory and visual..nice scene 10++ cheeers.

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