Tell Me That You Don't Want Me Poem by Edward Kofi Louis

Tell Me That You Don't Want Me

Rating: 4.8


Time and time again! !
Writing always,
No reply from you;
Do you still love me?
Tell me that you don't want me!
After getting another man on your side.

Aside from the tour! ! !
Inside and outside,
Inside your closet with your love;
Being very far away from me! ! !
Do you still love me?
Tell me that you don't want me!
Seeing the muse of a different culture over here.

Around the world with my mind,
Around the world with the heart of peace;
Able to touch your heart with my works!
Dreams,
Into another realm!
Do you still love me?
Tell me that you don't want me,
Tell me that you don't love me!
Aftet all these year.

Thursday, May 28, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life,poetic expression
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 29 May 2020

Culture! ! ! Taking away the one you love. Love and art! Thanks for your comment on my poem. Stay blessed always.

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Edward Kofi Louis 29 May 2020

Love and life, Lost love! ! Questions; Love and pain. Thanks for your comment on my poem. Stay blessed always.

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Dheeraj 29 May 2020

Sometimes the heart wants a strong No from beloved than her silence. Not replying and stepping ahead could be mature to her. But truth is love is better immature, if there is maturity, there are senses, then the love is also tactical. Well written..! ! 10++

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Khairul Ahsan 29 May 2020

The poem evoked a feeling of sadness in me. 'Tell me that you don't want me' - please do not ask like this, dear poet! The answer may be too harsh to digest. A poet's mind should search for the answer poetically. Patching up, if possible, is the best solution for peace.

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