Tell Me A Story Comments

who cares what you or me think, Breeze? The jury thought it was'nt innocent...and 'that' is a real murder...indeed...10

Interesting Poem and Interesting structure! Keep Writing!

A different type of poem with diverse taste. Form and content of this piece is non-typical that attracts. 10 from me.

new style of poetry, good job

Wow that was deep I never exp something like that. Nice story telling great write and remember. Spread Yourself! ! ! !